tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post4559372270994333253..comments2023-11-03T03:14:43.155-07:00Comments on Pseudo's Spot: Spin Cycle: Honeyman State Park, 1970Pseudohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430783970802030846noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-80389028627369306752009-06-26T17:00:41.698-07:002009-06-26T17:00:41.698-07:00That's a great story. That's a tough age,...That's a great story. That's a tough age, and I feel for 13 year old Pseudo, but we can learn a lot from it. There you were yearning to do that walk, to swim in the ocean, and you believed it possible, nothing was going to get in your way and you did it. You also thought the ranger may have thought you were cute. At that age you are invincible, and believe anything is possible, Wonderful stuff.Brigithttp://hotmiddlescence.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-18438253023529308342009-06-20T17:02:05.753-07:002009-06-20T17:02:05.753-07:00Ah ha ha! That was great!Ah ha ha! That was great!Captain Dumbasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02214826608461609241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-73638171582825907862009-06-20T07:58:00.111-07:002009-06-20T07:58:00.111-07:00Oh, well done, Ms C :)Oh, well done, Ms C :)♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-37251274644909013312009-06-20T03:57:50.244-07:002009-06-20T03:57:50.244-07:00Wow Ms Pseudo- what a great story! Now I know wher...Wow Ms Pseudo- what a great story! Now I know where you get your sticktoitiveness from! That's a girl with gumption!A girl I'm pleased to know (even if virtually).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-48234879457538636472009-06-19T21:46:27.255-07:002009-06-19T21:46:27.255-07:00The ending wrapped it up perfectly, I can just ima...The ending wrapped it up perfectly, I can just imagine your teenager's bravado being completely eclipsed by the freezing ocean water. Stop your heart cold...wonderful description. I despise cold water. Brrr.Mrsbearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16338013137281543065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-81210932099284601932009-06-19T19:34:44.731-07:002009-06-19T19:34:44.731-07:00mom still claims that you drew a route on the note...mom still claims that you drew a route on the note, as well as saying you'd leave markers along the way... "like hazel and gretel leaving a f**king trail of bread crumbs!" <br /><br />but you know i never pay any attention to her.<br /><br />stellar piece, enjoyed every word. awesome.shaunnahttp://shaunna.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-73490910945500250202009-06-19T17:33:35.119-07:002009-06-19T17:33:35.119-07:00Pseudo, what a fantastic piece of writing. You su...Pseudo, what a fantastic piece of writing. You sucked me in and had me anxious to find out the ending... at first, I wasn't sure if this was a fictional short story, or if it was really something that happened to you.<br /><br />You're a great writer, and I hope you do write a book and get it published!!Girl Tornadohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07289862625817473671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-58693487450695472722009-06-19T16:54:33.049-07:002009-06-19T16:54:33.049-07:00I love that you tried to be all badass and dive in...I love that you tried to be all badass and dive into the freezing water. I would have done the same.Caseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13477976300026766137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-61817775995535082032009-06-19T16:16:14.297-07:002009-06-19T16:16:14.297-07:00Great writing - I loved it! : )Great writing - I loved it! : )Twenty Four At Hearthttp://www.twentyfouratheart.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-50087287610991005872009-06-19T14:20:11.213-07:002009-06-19T14:20:11.213-07:00What a great story.What a great story.Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10513249357085004389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-52785659939540542812009-06-19T10:32:22.288-07:002009-06-19T10:32:22.288-07:00Beautiful piece of writing Pseudo!
RE: Blogger a...Beautiful piece of writing Pseudo! <br /><br />RE: Blogger and the spacing - I *hate* that. Either it gives you no spaces, or enormous spaces. I recently downloaded Windows LiveWriter blog-writing program that is supposed to be great & help you avoid that nonsense.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14963564417866585477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-69685990429954645892009-06-19T09:00:32.106-07:002009-06-19T09:00:32.106-07:00Love, love this story! Bittersweet AND funny!Love, love this story! Bittersweet AND funny!Shangrilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06489338372829942038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-81986428876883685432009-06-19T06:11:17.498-07:002009-06-19T06:11:17.498-07:00Absolutely on the edge of my seat... what a wonder...Absolutely on the edge of my seat... what a wonderful writer you are Pseudo Girl!!<br /><br />I would have done exactly as you did, braved the as yet unknown cold waters for the sake of that cute ranger but also because I would have needed to work off some teenage stress.<br /><br />Blogger pisses me off about the para spacing thing too, and a few other oddities.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16813508472498593787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-90514954180408187002009-06-19T05:04:16.706-07:002009-06-19T05:04:16.706-07:00Yep, me too...on the edge of my seat. You ARE wri...Yep, me too...on the edge of my seat. You ARE writing that book this summer, right?Smart Mouth Broadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12157189992200894945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-42249920642188350772009-06-19T01:29:58.032-07:002009-06-19T01:29:58.032-07:00Wonderful read!Wonderful read!hillgrandmomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01805698959846687562noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-37879049944938616782009-06-18T22:42:47.295-07:002009-06-18T22:42:47.295-07:00WOW! You are an amazing writer...loved the story....WOW! You are an amazing writer...loved the story...off to look through your blog for some more! : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669318430348189265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-39231876530753669982009-06-18T21:52:18.275-07:002009-06-18T21:52:18.275-07:00Oh wow. This was a fantastic post. You have such a...Oh wow. This was a fantastic post. You have such a way with words.AiringMyLaundryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11051140760624657630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-61370526425147580962009-06-18T21:16:24.551-07:002009-06-18T21:16:24.551-07:00This is a wonderful post and I was glued to every ...This is a wonderful post and I was glued to every word. What an adventurer you are. I love the beach its where I feel the closest to god to be honest. I guess you will hiking on the sands this summer?Lillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14597193176450931002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-17952835473877058862009-06-18T20:00:32.972-07:002009-06-18T20:00:32.972-07:00Great story....Hawaii is the perfect place for you...Great story....Hawaii is the perfect place for you. Sun, sand & surf and luxurious blue skies.<br /><br />I didn't see the ice bath ending coming. Yikes!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-90386572248875963442009-06-18T19:53:11.258-07:002009-06-18T19:53:11.258-07:00ahhh....the oregon coast. Oregonians will swim...i...ahhh....the oregon coast. Oregonians will swim...in the summer...sometimes. I always say that after the first two minutes you don't feel anything anyway.Christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05468422056345875269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-55082585093244241102009-06-18T19:29:20.940-07:002009-06-18T19:29:20.940-07:00From the first word to the last, a breathtaking re...From the first word to the last, a breathtaking read! I loved it! Especially the last part, so true for the age! You're linked!Sprite's Keeperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00790341033920919000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-90260353515513651922009-06-18T18:54:55.266-07:002009-06-18T18:54:55.266-07:00Omigosh, that was awesome! Bwahahaha.
I don't...Omigosh, that was awesome! Bwahahaha.<br /><br />I don't want to say that the more serious aspects didn't matter, but it was like making us take a spoonful of medicine then quickly following it with a sweet glass of sparkling cider.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing. :)Kristanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04771013578685419826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-11827069484133772472009-06-18T18:47:25.011-07:002009-06-18T18:47:25.011-07:00Wonderful story! I felt like I was there.Wonderful story! I felt like I was there.Sanewithoutdrugshttp://sanewithoutdrugs.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-42963012495663860312009-06-18T18:44:44.673-07:002009-06-18T18:44:44.673-07:00I think if I was that ranger i would have laughed ...I think if I was that ranger i would have laughed my ass off too :)Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3198460211087859887.post-3755206077908920062009-06-18T18:41:32.554-07:002009-06-18T18:41:32.554-07:00HA! I loved this! You could use this if you ever...HA! I loved this! You could use this if you ever teach the Hero's Journey ...Rikkihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11889968115671704243noreply@blogger.com